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Jared Lambert's avatar

Spooky and cute. I think it's wholesome to think about a bunch of ghost kids eternally playing together and having little ghost competitions.

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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Thanks for reading, Jared. The seed for this story came from imagining what kind of trouble kids would get into if they had the doldrums of eternity challenging them to find ways to pass the time and no authority around to tell them, "No." I think there's a lot more to explore with this direction and I will likely revisit this concept again.

I really appreciate your time and comments.

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L. R. Conti's avatar

So spooky and fitting for this time of year, we’ll done!

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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Thanks, L!

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

So dark and sad, too.

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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Thanks for reading, Liz. Maybe a little too dark? 😬

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Not at all! It was perfect.

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