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L. R. Conti's avatar

Ooh, love the imagery and suspense—It stands on its own, but I would definitely be up for another installment!

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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Thanks, L! I had a lot of fun writing this one, especially with the dialogue. I would love to revisit this time and place and see what other wicked things lie waiting in the village of Wyldewood (working name).

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James Finch's avatar

This was a good read. Thank you for this!

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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Hey James! Thanks for reading and for the positive review.

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Jimmy Doom's avatar

Well done. Good suspense, good dialogue

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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Thanks for reading, Jimmy. I appreciate the positive words and the subscribe!

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M. N. Tarrint's avatar

This had a creepy old world back woods vibe

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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Thank you for reading, M.N. and I love the response.

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